bad bad bad It can be used
I'll be honest. The beginning seems to be promising but once it hits 00:12 the change the flow seems to be running all over the place. It's not like it's that bad, it can still be used in various types of games especially horror.
Maybe you can try adding more in between beats between the drums beats with different thumps or snares probably might make it better. Additional synth at the background might add more feel to it.
I'm just giving opinions and you are still the composer. As for the effort and style I give you 4 star. Can be better. But since the title is bad bad bad. I assume that maybe I am wrong and this piece fits as it is.
